Saturday, 27 August 2011

Six Sentence Sunday- Untamed Hawaiian Heat

Wow! How time flies? It's been a while since I've participated.  It's been that kind of summer. Today I'd like to offer a bit from my erotic sci-fi/paranormal romance, Untamed Hawaiian Heat.

Set up: Kiana is pouring over some maps stressed out trying to figure out what the Obsidian Syndicate wants with Hawaii and Mateo is worried that she's not taking care of herself. She's also just admitted to feeling a restlessness building inside her that she doesn't know what is.So he decides to distract her from her worries. (NOTE: They are linked telepathically through their cybernetic implants. That's why some of the dialogue is in italics.)



He scattered kisses over her mouth and cheeks, nibbling his way to her ear. “Then let me build something else inside you,” he whispered huskily in her ear. He bit gently into her neck, trailing his lips along the column of her throat as he reached for the buttons at her breasts. “You know I can do it.”
His words slid into her mind conjuring images of their bodies writhing in ecstasy. “Yes you can…in such delicious ways too.”


I hope you enjoyed my SSS offering this week. Hopefully things will settle down enough for me to get back on schedule again. Click here to return to Six Sentence Sunday.

Until we meet again...where passion breathes...

Shay
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16 comments:

  1. Liz27 August 2011 at 19:30

    woo hoo! VERY HOT! thanks for sharing it. very well done.
    Liz

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  2. Lucy Felthouse28 August 2011 at 04:21

    Wow, nice six! Very hot :)

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  3. Anonymous28 August 2011 at 05:34

    Sizzling, fantastic six! well done.

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  4. An Open Book28 August 2011 at 06:24

    Let the sexual tension race begin- lol- great 6
    Dawne P

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  5. Jean Joachim Books28 August 2011 at 06:26

    Delicious taste, Shay. Very sexy makes me want to know more. Great six!

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  6. Kallypso Masters28 August 2011 at 06:29

    Great sensual Six! And welcome back to SSS Land! Hope things are on an even keel again soon!

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  7. Unknown28 August 2011 at 07:31

    Oooh, he sounds like a good person to share telepathic abilities with! :)

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  8. Alexandra Christian28 August 2011 at 08:13

    Oooohh... what a smouldering little bite.... I loved it!

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  9. S.Lira28 August 2011 at 09:12

    Love the six Shay!

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  10. Julian Spong28 August 2011 at 10:09

    very hot six

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  11. Karysa Faire28 August 2011 at 11:26

    Sexy. I'm thinking she gets distracted-at least for a little bit of time.

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  12. Unknown28 August 2011 at 16:06

    I love the way you handled the telepathic communication. Well done

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  13. Christa Paige28 August 2011 at 16:43

    What a gorgeous, sensual scene. Love the telepathic dialog.

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  14. Shay MacLean28 August 2011 at 20:59

    Thanks for the wonderful comments, guys. I'm having a lot of fun working on this MS. So many new and interesting ways to bring my MC's together by adding the sci-fi and paranormal elements. :) Glad you enjoyed it.

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  15. Unknown29 August 2011 at 02:16

    Very sensual! :)

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  16. Laura29 August 2011 at 02:40

    I love the mind-to-mind contact, sexy!

    Laura

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