Saturday, 3 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday- Untamed Hawaiian Heat

Welcome, readers. Another Sunday is upon us. My how the time is flying. Please enjoy another six from my revisions of Untamed Hawaiian Heat. Last week you met my heroine, Kiana and one of my heroes, Mateo. This week is Tiaki, my Rift Hunter.

Setup: Tiaki is a Rift Hunter from the Phoinix Galaxy. He's been assigned the task of closing a rift through time and space that was opened near Earth in 2011 only something goes wrong and he's sucked into the rift instead and deposited at the feet (literally) of Kiana.


As the end of the vortex approached there was another energy spike, it thrust him through the last meter of the tunnel. What the hell? He slammed into the hard packed ground with a bone crunching thud. Pain shot through every molecule of his body. He lifted his head slightly when he heard the sound of guns being fired nearby. The last thing he saw before the blackness enveloped him was a woman standing over him, a stunned expression on her face.

I hope you enjoyed this weeks six. Have a happy and safe Labor Day tomorrow. Click here to return to Six Sentence Sunday site.
Until we met again...where passion breathes...
Shay

12 comments:

  1. Oh - suspenseful! I want to read more!

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  2. Hell yeah, this was awesome I like your six!

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  3. I really like this girl - nice job!!

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  4. Ohhh...who is the mystery woman? Need to know
    Great 6 this week
    Dawne P

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  5. Oooooo, sounds action packed and very good to read. Keep us posted, lol.

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  6. Sounds like his bad luck is about to take a turn for the better.

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  7. Interesting. What to do when someone literally falls at your feet? :-) Fabulous six!

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  8. Oooohhhh very very interesting! Great six!

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  9. fab six... and yup, no doubt she did look stunned!

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  10. That guy knows how to make an entrance! No wonder the woman was stunned. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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