Saturday, 3 September 2011

Six Sentence Sunday- Untamed Hawaiian Heat

Welcome, readers. Another Sunday is upon us. My how the time is flying. Please enjoy another six from my revisions of Untamed Hawaiian Heat. Last week you met my heroine, Kiana and one of my heroes, Mateo. This week is Tiaki, my Rift Hunter.

Setup: Tiaki is a Rift Hunter from the Phoinix Galaxy. He's been assigned the task of closing a rift through time and space that was opened near Earth in 2011 only something goes wrong and he's sucked into the rift instead and deposited at the feet (literally) of Kiana.


As the end of the vortex approached there was another energy spike, it thrust him through the last meter of the tunnel. What the hell? He slammed into the hard packed ground with a bone crunching thud. Pain shot through every molecule of his body. He lifted his head slightly when he heard the sound of guns being fired nearby. The last thing he saw before the blackness enveloped him was a woman standing over him, a stunned expression on her face.

I hope you enjoyed this weeks six. Have a happy and safe Labor Day tomorrow. Click here to return to Six Sentence Sunday site.
Until we met again...where passion breathes...
Shay
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12 comments:

  1. Kellie Kamryn4 September 2011 at 00:31

    Oh - suspenseful! I want to read more!

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  2. Anonymous4 September 2011 at 05:05

    Hell yeah, this was awesome I like your six!

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  3. Cassandre Dayne4 September 2011 at 05:11

    I really like this girl - nice job!!

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  4. An Open Book4 September 2011 at 06:42

    Ohhh...who is the mystery woman? Need to know
    Great 6 this week
    Dawne P

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  5. S.Lira4 September 2011 at 08:09

    Great six! Commented

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  6. Unknown4 September 2011 at 09:24

    Oooooo, sounds action packed and very good to read. Keep us posted, lol.

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  7. Emily Cale4 September 2011 at 11:22

    Sounds like his bad luck is about to take a turn for the better.

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  8. Piper4 September 2011 at 12:00

    Interesting. What to do when someone literally falls at your feet? :-) Fabulous six!

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  9. Carrie Ann Ryan4 September 2011 at 13:24

    Oooohhhh very very interesting! Great six!

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  10. Unknown4 September 2011 at 20:05

    I bet she looked shocked. lol.

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  11. JoAnne Kenrick11 September 2011 at 07:57

    fab six... and yup, no doubt she did look stunned!

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  12. Sandra Nachlinger11 September 2011 at 15:12

    That guy knows how to make an entrance! No wonder the woman was stunned. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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